Writing tip of the week
The most important part of a story is how you develop and portray the characters. These determines how much people like them and want to see what happens to them.
Bad characters = no reader caring = no enjoyment (no matter how engaging the concept.
Ask yourself when last you cried when something bad happened to a character in a book that you were reading or a movie that you were watching. What did that writer do to develop the character and make them a real person?